On Friday afternoon 26th November, Room 7 and 1 were prepared for the water slide. I didn't participate but it was nice to see both classes enjoying the slide. What made it slippery was the soap and water, which made it faster for them to slide down. This was also the first time the slide has ever happened at our school.
The slide was set up on the bottom field Mike the school caretaker. It looked like a lot of fun for the students that tried the slide. I think the teachers and students will help make something that is better than the slide. I'm looking forward to what they have planned in the future.
That's it for this blog, have a good day :)
Hi Sonny,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blog post about the water slide! You added a lot of detail and information into this.
What was the reason you didn't get to go on the water slide? Maybe next time you could add that.
Overall I really enjoyed reading your blog post! I hope you have a good day! Bye!
-Tiare.
Hi Sonny
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job describing what it would have felt like going down the slide. Your perspective as a spectator paints a picture of fun!
I like it how you've got two really descriptive paragraphs - one for how fun it was, and the other about what the slide looked like.
I made some edits to paragraphing and sentence structure.
Mr N