This weeks writing task was a free-verse poem about ''my Mums hands''.We practise using semi -colons, a range of sentence length and using better vocabulary. Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to write about my mum because she was someone very special to me.
My Mum's Hands by Sonny
My mum's hands
Are soft as a baby's hands.
Her back,is as soft as a pillow.
Her legs,is strong as a Samoan person.
Her laugh is a wind blowing.
Her voice is a singing troll.
living peacefully.
Wrapped with music.
