Homework

Well this week's blog post is about homework and I know for lots of people it is really annoying sometime when we get extras but its not a problem if we just give it a try it basically like practise and getting ready for collage and i don't think i'm ready to challenge myself against homework twice the size as what we have as intermediates so what i should say is at least give a try we have family,friend,cousin or a dog maybe? so that's why we have good teachers to help us out before collage because its not the same as right now,so if you are viewing this give hard things a try it could go well for you:) 

My Mum's hands

This weeks writing task was a free-verse poem about ''my Mums hands''.We practise using semi -colons, a range of sentence length and using better vocabulary. Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to write about my mum because she was someone very special to me.

  

My Mum's Hands by Sonny

My mum's hands

 

Are soft as a baby's hands.

 

Her back,is as soft as a pillow. 

Her legs,is strong as a Samoan person.

 

Her laugh is a wind blowing. 

Her voice is a singing troll. 

living peacefully. 

Wrapped with music.